Friday, May 21, 2010

Can someone help me scan a poem for assonance?

Capitilize the examples of assonance (the repetition of vowel sounds)





Slap. Clap.





The lake's back





laps the flat





boat. Croak,





goes a frog,





croak. Flo-





tillas of vanilla





water lilies





float. Moats


of air flare,





filled with day diamonds,





flame. Tame





turtles lurch





like dreadnoughts





across murky





floors. Oars





dig dingles





in the sun-shingles





roof of the water.





Pines shine,





singing their green creeds.

Can someone help me scan a poem for assonance?
Assonance is the repetition of vowel sounds in a poem. So in this poem most lines have vowel sounds that repeat. Sometimes it is the sound of a long vowel, and sometimes a short vowel.





In this poem you have the words boat, croak, goes, flotilla, float, and moats all with the long O sound.





Day, flame, and tame all have long A.





Slap, clap, back, lap and flat all have short A





Floors, oars





turtles, lurch, murky





dig, dingles, shingles





pines, shine





green, creeds.





I hope this helps. Best of luck.
Reply:cant you find it just by reading it and seeing which ones rhyme? might be wrong hto.
Reply:sl*A*p cl*A*p


the lakes b*A*ck


l*A*ps the fl*A*t


b*OA*t cr*OA*k,


g*OE*s a frog


cr*OA*k fl*O*


t(**i**)ll(*a*)s of van(**i**)ll(*a*)


water l(**i**)lies


fl*OA*t m*OA*ts


of (*AI*)r fl(*A*)re


f(**i**)lled with d(*A*)y diamonds,


fl(*A*)me t(*A*)me


t**U**rtles l**U**rch


like dreadn(*OU*)ghts


acr(*O*)ss m**U**rky


fl*OO*rs *OA*rs


d(*i*)g d(*i*)ngles


(*i*)n the sun-sh(*i*)ngles


roof of the water.


P(**I**)nes sh(**I**)ne,


s(*i*)nging their gr*EE*n cr*EE*ds.





Depending what your teacher wants, these also have the same vowel sound: Fr*O*g, dreadn*OU*ghts, acr*O*ss, w*A*ter. Also "of" and "sun." Please ask. I don't think your teacher expects you to mark every "the" and "a" as vowels in between, but it's better to ask. At the very least, it will show an effort to study this in detail.


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